Walt Coburn opens "A Notched Gun" with a bank robbery executed with chilling efficiency: Sam Graybull shoots a teller "between the eyes," then a cashier in the back, and threatens a stenographer. The blizzard muffles the shots, and the killer rides into the storm, his mind already on whisky and boasting. Coburn's prose is lean and brutal, mirroring Graybull's own clipped, contemptuous voice—"That damn' bank dude's mouth flopped open shore comical"—and the narrative stays locked inside the outlaw's perspective, revealing a man who measures lives as "tally notches on his gun."

Voice of a Killer

Coburn builds the story almost entirely through Sam Graybull's interior monologue and dialogue, refusing to soften or explain him. The narration adopts Graybull's vernacular: "Mebbe if it wasn't fer the missus, Pete might swap a hayfork fer a gun." The killer's laugh is described as a "rattle" and his lips as "black" bared from "tobacco stained teeth." Even his final moments—"Come an' git it! Come on, you red necks!"—are rendered in his own defiant, slurred speech. The author never steps outside this voice to moralize; the reader is left inside a mind that sees people as obstacles or tools.

The Blizzard as Accomplice

The storm is not just setting but active participant. It "muffled the sound of the shots," hides Graybull's tracks, and forces the posse to "hole up at the first ranch." Coburn uses weather to compress time and space: the outlaw rides through "black as a hat" darkness, drifting with the wind. The blizzard also isolates characters—the Peralta cabin across the river becomes a distant refuge. Yet the storm that enables the crime also contributes to Graybull's downfall, as the sheriff later speculates he "must have got drunk, blind drunk, and lost his way." The environment is indifferent, amoral, and lethal.

Notches and Names

The title object—a notched gun—appears only at the story's end, in the hands of the dead chaplain, Graybull Peralta. The notches are a tally of kills, but the gun itself becomes a symbol passed from father to son. Coburn draws a parallel between Sam Graybull's final laugh—"like the death rattle"—and the son's death in the Argonne, where Major Steele finds him with "bared lips, the swollen, slitted eyes." The repetition of "Handle him gently" from sheriff to surgeon ties the two deaths together, suggesting a legacy of violence that the son's chaplaincy could not escape.

A Generational Frame

The story spans twenty years in its final paragraphs, jumping from Sam Graybull's death to the battlefield of France. The note Graybull carried—a postscript to Pete Peralta's plea for a doctor—reveals that the outlaw's last act was to fetch help for a pregnant woman. The bounty money is left to educate the child, named Graybull. This coda reframes the preceding violence not as redemption but as a single decent choice. Coburn does not sentimentalize: the son dies with a Bible and the notched gun, and the final line—"find fat meat in the Shadow Hills"—is a cowboy's blessing, not a Christian one.

Coburn's story is a compact study in point of view and moral ambiguity, using the western's conventions—the outlaw, the posse, the storm—to examine how a single act of decency can coexist with a lifetime of cruelty. Readers should attend to the way the prose shifts from Graybull's coarse interiority to the sheriff's grim respect, and how the notched gun becomes a token of inheritance rather than a simple symbol of evil.